tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1268291127959105573.post7187085243472908673..comments2023-10-28T05:24:12.302-07:00Comments on Pray for Rain: The reviser and the revisedLaura Canonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16574566234310522696noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1268291127959105573.post-82114951603825354792010-05-11T19:55:14.907-07:002010-05-11T19:55:14.907-07:00I hate first chapters.
I tagged you on my blog, t...I hate first chapters.<br /><br />I tagged you on my blog, though.Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1268291127959105573.post-78974973519893966902010-05-08T20:03:01.283-07:002010-05-08T20:03:01.283-07:00Interesting. I read another blogger who read her ...Interesting. I read another blogger who read her friend's novel backwards like that. She liked the new perspective. Maybe your first chapter does need a bit more flair. Does it need more action? Does the story start better at chapter 2? Just some thoughts.Mary Aalgaardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051735579638637382noreply@blogger.com